Sunday, November 15, 2009

How to avoid health fraud?

There are many ways to avoid health fraud. First, you have to ask a doctor or a pharmacist about the cure. Asking about the treatment helps you to know if it's real one or not. Second, you need to ask anyone you know who tried a cure like this. This helps you to avoid dangerous side effects or perhaps save your life. Finally, you should be more conscious about health fraud or quacks. they use similar ways to advertise their treatments and you can easily recognize them. These are some of the ways to avoid health fraud.

2 comments:

  1. Thanks, Amany for posting your writing assignment. I really enjoyed reading your paragraph.

    Feedback:

    1)Please revise this sentence: "this help you to avoid dangerous side effects or perhaps save your life." I'm sure you can fix it.

    2) in your sentence "if it's real one or fraud one." Better say: "if it's a real one or not"

    3) Spelling: quakes = quacks


    Thank you, Amany, for your good job...

    Keep it up :)

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  2. Amany, actually I like your sentence "this help you to avoid dangerous side effects or perhaps save your life." better than the new one!! I asked you to revise it, wanting you just to correct the verb "help" as it should be "helps" :) Do you see my point now?

    Thanks :)

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